Across my dimensions,
The brave fought for
my reinvention.
Spreading the message
across my geography
To find a place in history.
Great are those heroes
So are the heroines
who fought against the foes
to restore my glory .
To my people,
I have a request!
Farmers working in soil
Put on a lot of toil.
Give them respect,
That’s what I suggest.
To my people ,
I have a request
Save those choking rivers
They shriek for help !
Empty are the groceries,
Due to the lost greeneries.
To my people ,
I have a request
Educate my kids
Who are my future.
Teach them equality
Let Fraternity and Liberty
clang in the air.
Let my daughters be free
Free from hurdles.
No more nirbhaya,
No more Asifa.
No more mob lynching.
Yet, Manipur hurts me.
To my leaders,
I have a request
Serve your people
With honesty
You’ll be known for
Your modesty.
To the youth,
I have a request
Age is just a number
When I am still a bairn.
Uphold my values,
Spread the hues
Of happiness!
Let my people,
Be humane,
Making me feel the warmth
Beyond religions
Beyond races
Let this spirit
Remain eternal!
With love ,India
Nice Poem… Revealing the truth and needs of this scenario.
Nice Poem Sumitra, Heart touching and explaining the inner voices of our nation.
Nice poem
Very well written poem that awakens the Indian Youth!!
Very well written Sumitra. Really a nice one.👍👍
Fantastic Read, Great Writing Sumitra 😍
Beautifully drafted…Way to go…
Nice poem dear. Good work..
Well written.. Expecting more👏👏👏👏👏
Nice one Sumitra 👌👌♥️
Nice one
Thought provoking ✨ ♥️
Fantastic
Let it come true..
“Beyond religions
Beyond races
Let this spirit
Remain eternal!”
Really a good poem
A perfect poem with a prefect touch of blended emotions.
That was splendid ❤️
Wonderful poem Sumitrakki! Conveys the message well in simple terms, also reminds us to be grateful of what we have been through and what we have achieved so far
Thank you for the lovely poem 🙂
Thought provoking one ….well done🙌
This is really a thought provoking poem… Well done
Nice one Sumitra. 🔥
Very well penned, the vocabulary is great , the message quite clear and yet the poem is simple enough for everyone to understand. One won’t need a teacher or interpreter to explain what the poet intended. …which i feel is really amazing . Great work Sumitra .keep it up. Hoping to read more poems from you
Nice to read. Fantastic Sumitra
Good
Nice one 👌👌
Nice to read. Fantastic Sumitra
Superb, keep it up
Fantastic.
Well written, Sumitra. 👍👍
Fantastic. Keep up
❤️✨
Your poem resonates deeply, urging respect for heroes, farmers, and the environment, while advocating for equality, justice, and integrity. Thank you for sharing this poignant reflection.
Really sooperb 👍👏🤗
Great creativity Sumitra for considering the cultural, historical and social context in the poem. Congratulations!!!
Well done Sumitra
Great thought! well done🙌🏻
This is really a thought provoking poem… Well done
Good thought.. Nice one ✌
Upon the canvas of words, this poem paints a scene,
With hues of emotion, vibrant and serene.
Rhymes are perfectly placed. Overall a beautiful poem and its meaning flows like a river, deep and clear.
Fantastic sumi akki.Nice poem and easy to understand.
Nice work. Well done 👍